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The Night & Its Moon

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Waxing Gibbous: The waxing gibbous phase is between a half moon and full moon. Waxing means it is getting bigger.

NASA explores the unknown in air and space, innovates for the benefit of humanity, and inspires the world through discovery.We have a story that was clearly written after reading/watching The Witcher series as SO many details were exactly copied. On top of abysmal editing and constant use of the same descriptors, spelling/grammar issues including inconsistent character name spelling?! It is blatantly obvious that this was written in a very short period of time without much revision, if any. This should have gone through minimum 6 months of extensive re-writes with a professional before being considered to be sold, especially at a full price listing. Our two protagonists couldn't be any different- yet they compliment each other like two half of a whole. The moon for night, if you will. They both have power- just in different ways. Dragons and Witches and Succubi, Ohh My! Let us also not forget to mention the fae. The Fae. The. Fae. If you like mythical creatures, immersive storytelling, and flawed characters this book is for you. But the reality is worse. The scandal is happening right now, and she brought it on herself. The behavior that she’s apologizing for is very much not in the past, and she clearly has not grown or changed (or been held accountable in any way, as apparently many of her followers are willing to fall for her lip service and instantly forgive her). She tries to excuse her bad behavior by calling it “a glitch in the matrix,” or attributing it to mental health, or claiming that being a new author has “a learning curve.” I’m sure it does! But she seems to be struggling on the learning curve of simply being a decent person. And, as a simply stated fact, this book's dedication is the best and most hilarious one I have ever read.

Example: “She steeled herself to try again. ‘Come on, you spineless jellyfish, she said, cursing herself as she summoned her grit” (p. 353). There’s weird mixing of archaic and modern terms. Terms like “she has not yet bled” and a “woman’s moon time” are more primitive, but then characters know and use “sexism” and “tokenism” and refer to serotonin, dopamine, and testosterone, ideas that wouldn’t have been understood in a modern way. It's like the author wants to make sure readers are aware that SHE is aware of these concepts, so she drops them into a context that doesn’t make sense. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD WHY WOULD YOU INCLUDE NOX GETTING WHIPPED?? and in the little timeskip after, referring to her 13 year old self as a "young woman" After witnessing the behaviour from both the author and the editor towards readers critiquing this book, I will not be reading this and I strongly urge you to do the same. The Moon does not produce its own light. There is only one source of light in our solar system, and that is the Sun. Without the Sun, our Moon would be completely dark. What you may have heard referred to as “moonlight” is actually just sunlight reflecting off of the Moon’s surface.

Details e-book The Night and Its Moon (The Night and Its Moon, 1)

Grammatical errors abound, although I think this edition has fewer than the original, which is…something.

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